Jack you need to make revisions to your fonts and the positioning of text.
1) Use slimmer more professional looking font. 2) Keep text away from the edge of the frame because at present it looks as though it's tipping off. 3) The 5 stars on your advert with NME - could you position this nearer the bottom of your advert.
Bring your productions back into school tomorrow so revisions can be done without delay.
Jack you need to make revisions to your fonts and the positioning of text.
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2) Keep text away from the edge of the frame because at present it looks as though it's tipping off.
3) The 5 stars on your advert with NME - could you position this nearer the bottom of your advert.
Bring your productions back into school tomorrow so revisions can be done without delay.
The revisions I've suggested in 1) and 2) reference your digipak front cover.
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